II
Amidst the murkiness that lingers
Hidden under the black silken shroud
Lies her white, translucent porcelain skin
Soft and cold
Her long wavy tresses
Beautiful and intimidating
Her piercing eyes
Sweet and eerie
Her full lips
Once rosy, now pale
Now curved up in a smile
So sharp and spiteful
It could cut across the thickest of skins
The strongest of hearts
The dead, the living, and those yet to be
posted by J @ 5:54 pm
Comments: 9
9 Comments:
Hmmmmm :)..where've u been girl? You don't show up on msgr anymore..
One day her heart will
Melt by the side of a fire.
They told her so,
But believed she never
Cos' that day, she'll wake up
To the love of three words
And a soul in metaphor.
From within and without
Transformed
Cold, dead eyes
Long gone...
A new life begotten
From a horrid moan
Two eyes, so blue and
So new, yet so old...
Many years on
She went by the side
Of a human to break out
I wonder why she
Never before did emote
Cos' that day her
Melted heart, up it woke
To the love of three words
And a metaphored soul
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Written in response to my understanding of this post. This comment goes up on my blog sometime in the near or distant future. Heh.
Death is just freedom from the curse of a mortal body.
@AC
WOW! Interesting, but not in the lines of what I meant :)
What happened to her dream?
is there a part III?
Wow! A long long time later... this post made some sense to me. Rather, I found some non-onliner on your blog. The poetry was nice...
@Arcane Crapper: That was awesome... will visit your blog!
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We're open to interpretations now, aren't we?
A life drained from a woman/girl. That's all I picturized. However, there might have been a reference to the self... Which was what I thought, and hence the reply...
Of course it might also refer to being-not-alive-while-alive kinda thing, apart from thousands of other possible interpretations.
I like your morbid style of writing... :)
looks like there's gonna be a third part.
PS: Your template is making it hard for me to view your blog at work. It draws a lot of unnecessary attention.
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